design graphic project

this a moonzher 22's logo. i'd been make this logo for design graphic lesson in my school. actually last wednesday this logo must collect to our teacher tapi tapi karena komputer sekolah gue itu suka bapuk jadi pas logo udh mau jadi mau di finishing ke photoshop malah hang komputernya, freehandnya ngablu bgt jadinya freehandnya mau ga mau mesti di close deh akhirnya minta dispensasi sm gurunya buat ngumpulinnya belakangan soalnya KOMPUTERNYA TAI!!! berhubung bel pergantian jam plajaran bentar lg yaudah deh jadinya di suruh bikin di rumah. ini deh jadinya (tapi blm smpe proses finishing di photoshop baru freehand aja, jelek bgt kaya logo polisi gmn gt)
*drop some comments for advice